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Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) rclukins 2008-06-07
ryan is scaring me! this is a really cool story, I love how he just bluntly says he hit them in the head with a shovel like "oh its nothing!"Author's response
lol. i was hoping someone would say something about that.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) emovampire 2008-06-07
I swear this is the best story ever written!
oh my god it is so moving.
TIME TO RATE!!!!Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) linerlover 2008-06-07
omg crazy!ryan!!! wooo!!!
ahem. i mean, oh no! he cant do that!
=DAuthor's response
lol!
bad ryan, bad, dont hit people in the head with shovels.Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxMy_Sweet_RevengexX 2008-06-07
Is it weird to say that Ryan still seems cute, even if he's torturing people? Because I kept saying "Aw!" over and over again. Does that make me weird? Probably. Oh well. This story is awesome. Update soon!
+Alice+Author's response
lol. i dont think its weird in the least bit because for some reason when i write about him toruring or inwardly threatening someone i just want to give him a huge bear hug through the computer screen and take him back through it with me. lmaoBet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-07
My, I feel stupid.
I thought in the last chapter, that he had killed them, already. I guess I was mistaken. But, all is well now! I understand.
Anyway, I'm finding sympathy for Aymi and Brendon and their marriage. Well, not anymore, but you get the point.
I can almost sense that Brendon truly loves Aymi, and that Ryan is making a rather fool (and lunatic) out of himself. I mean, he needs to realize that he can't make Brendon love him, and injuring them isn't really the best solution.
I feel bad for Ryan, though. Because he is so in love with Brendon, but he doesn't realize that Brendon doesn't really love him. He loves Aymi. And risking their lives isn't the way to prove your love to someone.
Of course, Ryan is crazy.
I absolutely adore this story and you must write more soon!Author's response
ok you know what, you mite as well be that little voice in my mind like the one ryan has because you my dear, get this story and the point im trying to get across completely (sp).
what im trying to convey is that ryan actually and truly thinks that brendon loves him and that this is just a big game that theyre playing, but i should shut up or ill tell the ending.
(dont feel stupid. i do that plenty of times, review to authors telling them how i hate them about leaving the last chapter with such suspense or something when theres a next chapter i didnt se. lol.)
anyhoo, i will be writing more soon. only thing is, i dont know when soon is so keep looking for it.
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