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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) TheDemon 2008-06-09

  Good Story so Far

  Author's response

  thanks
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) LordSeagen 2008-06-10

  Great story. I like how Sirius is a ghost and around to help Harry. I like how you piqued the interest of Hermione's father having more than one wife. Update soon.

  Author's response

  To tell the truth; I had no idea at all that Sirius was going to show up until he opened his mouth! The characters go where they want to; which makes telling the story so interesting.
  
  As for Hermione; I wanted her to be open to the idea of sharing; and this seemed to be one of the easiest ways to go about it.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) Entilzah 2008-06-10

  Good stuff as always. Looking forward to you posting more.
  
  And yes, that is a simple, generic review... but since it is already mostly written... :-)

  Author's response

  Thanks; and, actually, I've made changes to each of the chapters before I post them, so they are very different from what I had written before.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) adamovita 2008-06-10

  Excellent story. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

  Author's response

  thanks, me too! I'm curious where the rest of the story is going to take me.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) thekev 2008-06-10

  Okay I know this is beieng lazy, but this is for chapters 1-8. what can I say but DAMN. Keep it up I hope Susan is in on the 'harryem'. Well I'll can't wait to see where you go with this.

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story; and; yes, I will say that Susan is going to be getting some Harry Attention! GRIN
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) Aerie22 2008-06-12

  At last! A harem smut fic where Harry actually seems to like his women. Too many of the ones I've read seem either to have Harry, who has barely ever been kissed before, starting to slap his closest lady friends around and calling them sluts, or having innocent young girls suddenly become subservient, mindless sex bots. I like that your Harry cares for the girls and they seem to care about him, without all the typical conventions of porn fiction developed by sweaty virgin teenaged boys. I hope you continue in this mode and not fall back on the SM/BD male domination stuff. Sex is so much better, and sexier, when you care about your partner.
  Aerie22

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad you like what I'm doing with the story. A key component in the bond that will be developing is an emotional connection between Harry and his ladies, and between the ladies themselves.
  
  Each of the girls will, to the best of my ability, each have a distinctive personality, and, while I can't promise there will be no BD/SM showing up in the story, it will strictly be in a role-playing encounter. Harry won't start whipping the girls and make them wear leather collars. They are his lovers/wives, not his slaves.
  
  I'll be posting more chapters tonight. I'm working on Chapter Nine right now.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) anglosaxon 2008-06-13

  hey absolutely love the story.... are u posting more chapters today.... want to take as much i can.... really enjoy this piece....

  Author's response

  I'm working on chapter 13 now, and I may post chapter 14 as well. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) Thumper 2008-06-13

  Okay First I would like to say I do like the story it is just on thinking about the story do I notice things that don't sit well with me. I like the Harry harem, I like the smut , Harry in a whore house not liking so much a sex club on some island I could go with but I just see this as wrong.
  First walks in on Fleur with another woman and lets the Weasel temper out calling her a whore ... then she breaks up with him and goes to work at a whore house? That really doesn't Track.
  Second Were pansy's parents death eaters and are they dead like the rest? Second I really want to know what Harry's reaction is going to be when he finds out that the Whore house he is in is not the magical equivalent to muggle sex clubs in the Caribbean but somewhere girls are sold into slavery and raped. Sorry that is what is happening to Pansy. Eloise says Sorry but there were compulsions on the letter. So you are saying a Letter with compulsions made it through from what you described to me as Major wards that just doesn't fly with me. Personally I Hope Harry Kills the Bitch. Eloise has had one or two girls sent to her and raped a year and she has been the madam since James , Remus and Sirius had been 17? So that 20 something years? So between 20 and 40 women have been sent to her and raped she really really really needs to die. and so do the staff that knew about it and just shrugged.
  Third I really hope that when James came of age and went there he wasn't already dating Lily because in cannon I think they were.
  Forth The niece of the new minister of magic is selling her body for money in a whore house. I really don't think Madam Bones is going to be minister long or she really did a shitty job of raising Susan.
  
  Im not saying I dont like the story just that parts of it Nag at me big time.

  Author's response

  Thanks for your feedback, and, while I understand there are things that you don't care for, I appreciate that you took the time to list them.
  
  There's a whole lot of background that I'm trying to work into the story, without have an info dump; but; I'll try to at least address a couple of your concerns.
  
  Fleur working in a brothel, especially after the comment from Bill is a little odd, and I'll have to address that in the story itself, because it's something that Harry would probably ask as well.
  
  Pansy's parents aren't death eaters, although they were sympathizers. And, when Harry finds out what is going on, he is going to blow his top, so don't worry about that. As for the rape issue, it's an extreme situation that Pansy's parents demanded, and, I will be addressing the subject when Harry confronts Eloise a few chapters down the line.
  
  As for Amelia, well, I doubt that the story will last long enough to get into the politics of the situation, but I do see her as being Minister for quite a while.
  
  And, the whole thing about Susan, or any of the girls, working there, as I've tried to mention in the story, it's something that quite a few of the pure-blood witches do, just to sow some wild oats, or for other reasons, and, although it's not discussed in public, there is really no stigma attached to working there. Let's face it, the purebloods think differently from other people GRIN
  
  Again, I hope that you can appreciate my points, and, as for the other items you raise, I'll be addressing them in the story.
  
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• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) Thumper 2008-06-13

  Okay First I would like to say I do like the story it is just on thinking about the story do I notice things that don't sit well with me. I like the Harry harem, I like the smut , Harry in a whore house not liking so much a sex club on some island I could go with but I just see this as wrong.
  First walks in on Fleur with another woman and lets the Weasel temper out calling her a whore ... then she breaks up with him and goes to work at a whore house? That really doesn't Track.
  Second Were pansy's parents death eaters and are they dead like the rest? Second I really want to know what Harry's reaction is going to be when he finds out that the Whore house he is in is not the magical equivalent to muggle sex clubs in the Caribbean but somewhere girls are sold into slavery and raped. Sorry that is what is happening to Pansy. Eloise says Sorry but there were compulsions on the letter. So you are saying a Letter with compulsions made it through from what you described to me as Major wards that just doesn't fly with me. Personally I Hope Harry Kills the Bitch. Eloise has had one or two girls sent to her and raped a year and she has been the madam since James , Remus and Sirius had been 17? So that 20 something years? So between 20 and 40 women have been sent to her and raped she really really really needs to die. and so do the staff that knew about it and just shrugged.
  Third I really hope that when James came of age and went there he wasn't already dating Lily because in cannon I think they were.
  Forth The niece of the new minister of magic is selling her body for money in a whore house. I really don't think Madam Bones is going to be minister long or she really did a shitty job of raising Susan.

  Author's response

  did you mean to double post this, or was ficwad being wonky? GRIN

• Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem

  (#) Thumper 2008-06-13

  Sorry for the double post
  

  Author's response

  no problem, I hope that you see where I'm coming from a little more clearly from my response.
  
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