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Hey everybody! I'm new!
Hey, I'm Raven Night {my pen name} Could somebody read my Inuyasha fanfic "Love and Loss" and tell me what they think?
Well, the first thing you need to do is reformat the chapters to be readable. One solid block of text is almost impossible for most people to follow.
um...about that...X_X I don't know how...
How did you upload ur story? That mite be the problem...
No...I mean...I never learned how to do paragraghs and such...I guess I didn't really pay attention.
oh! well, i'd volunteer to beta-read for you but i don't know anything about Inuyasha. Sorry... But ya, i'd suggest getting a beta-reader to help you out with that!