Heaven does not repent; it's unforgiving nature has doomed us all.
I can really relate. Reminds me how Earth is. Seriously loved it!
Brilliant poem, keep writing!
very deep. Yukimara Sanada Marise approves.
There were certain parts that pulled me in, especially the ending. I liked the repetition in it, made the lines sink deeper and stand out. All in all:
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