Unrequited love is a very sad thing indeed. It can ruin someone's entire life.
Okay, let me be the first to say:
This is very, very good. You paint a vivid picture with your words. My favorite part had to be where Frank was describing hanging himself, however creepy that sounds. That was great. Loved it.
Well done, and all that. Your writing style is excellent.
I loved it. It's as simple as that. I could FEEL the poor guys pain as I was reading it. You have done an excellent job describing his feelings.
And I'm so glad you never killed him off in the end. Well done. xx
I love you. Let me hug your face.
You're hurting my feelings with this. I swear if I could rid my brain of this shipping pain I would but sometimes it's really hard.
You just made it a billion times harder.
I love your everything though.
Thank you for hurting me.
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