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Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) lycus 2010-08-26
No! NO! NO! NO! you leave Hermione right where she is, Because that is where Hermione is suppost to be. If people don't like so what, there are just as many people who want Hermione there with her man as people who don't. So please stick to your original story.Author's response
who said I was rewriting the original? I'm going to keep the original but make a copy which will be solely Harry/Daphne. As a result, there will be two stories: one Harry/Daphne/Hermione and one Harry/Daphne.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) lycus 2010-08-26
Thank you! thank you! thank you! I love you man...No Homo.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) LordMesron 2010-08-27
I am very happy to see that you are keeping the original story, and doing the one with only H/DG as a separate story. While I do like H/DG, H/Hr is my absolute favorite ship in HP. It can be just H/Hr, or H/Hr/one or more others.
In addition to that, this story has been really good so far. Can't wait to see where it is headed.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-08-27
I think an Author shod write how and what they want, if people complain or do not like a story, they can NOT READ IT!
I get mad when I am reading a story and the Author stops writing the story becouse people complain.
Please write the stor(s) they way you want to.
Looking for more of this and your other stories.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) austrian_shadow 2010-08-27
Aloah,
as long as you're continuing this nice ship H/Hr/DG it's fine with me, but realy.... if someone does not like a story... hey there is nobody that forces him or she to read it ;-)
.... your story did have a great start, so don't let some unsatisfied grumbler bother you.... keep your promising work up...
KR
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(#) steve2668 2010-08-27
No. You should leave the story a H/HR/DG. i am enjoying this. You must remember what every writer needs to learn.. You can never please everbody you can only please yourself. If they don't like the story they can go read anouther, it only matters that you enjoy what you are writing.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) grookill 2010-08-27
I took a quick look at the reviews and I think the issue is not WHO the third person is but rather the changes from the accepted history of her.
Anyhow I have a suggestion or two on how to get that muse working...
Write a bunch of brief one line plot points (like "Harry and Daphne kick Ron Weasley's shins after Ron insults Neville for having a toad for a pet". When you think you have enough for a couple of chapters, put them in an order that makes sense and start writing.
Another idea is to come up with the major events and write them down. With enough of them you will have a story outline that can help you when your muse decides to visit Antarctica by way of leaky row boat.
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(#) LabRat 2010-09-25
Just wanted to remind you that this is your story. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. Don't create extra work for yourself just because others don't like something you did.
If you're goint to let the readers dictate the flow of the story, then that's something that you do from the outset, and use polls. Remember, when it comes to your stories, it's your world, they're just the squirrels, so tell them to back off yer nuts.Serpent Souls, Merged as One
(#) dangermix123 2010-09-29
I agree with the post above. Please don't get discouraged! Write the story you want to see written and don't try to cater to EVERYONE, especially on the internet where people are confrontation just because they can be annonymous!
I look forward to the next chapter of this story!
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