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The Devil's Calling
11 reviews"He’s hurt my Mikey." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-09
Oh my gee! I love it! Poor Mikey :( But I love ittt!! Ssoooo much! It's great! You are an amazing writer!!Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm sooooo glad that you liked it! :DPerfectly Imperfect
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-09
Oh my gee! I love it! Poor Mikey :( But I love ittt!! Ssoooo much! It's great! You are an amazing writer!!Perfectly Imperfect
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-09
Truly amazing as usual. I liked the dialogue in it. I was thinking Mikey was gonna wake up now any second with Pete shouting down the phone at Gerard. I can't Pete got him like this again. I thought Pete was like his... his.. saviour or something. But I'm sure he'll fix up Mikey again. He is very good at it! Update soon pleaseAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this went alright!
I'm relieved that you liked the dialogue, I'm really trying to improve the way that I write conversations, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot. Pete is still kind of his saviour, it's just that he is still a human being and is not perfect. I guess that's kinda what I wanted to show with this.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-09
aww! poor mikey :( falling out of the bed. please don't let pete get punched in the face again-he's too pretty. love this story! please update soon!
OXOAuthor's response
Yeah, poor Mikey. And I agree with you about Pete being too pretty to get punched in the face!
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you like this story! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-09
Wooooah that was great! That phone conversation was awesome :D I'm excited now, I want to see what happens even more than before (which is afuckinglot xD). Moremormore!Author's response
Thank you so very much; I'm really pleased that you think this chapter is alright and that the phone conversation worked. I was quite nervous about the conversation as I don't really like doing dialogue, so it's a real relief to hear that you think it went alright.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-01-09
Gerard had it coming but poor Mikey :'(Author's response
Yeah, Gerard kinda deserved that. And definitely poor Mikey! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-09
WELL NOW THEY'RE ALL IDIOTS!!
You can't put out a fire with more fire. Honestly, sometimes I think Mikey might be better off dead. But that's just the pessimist in me I guess. Things could get better... I still love Pete, but his logic is all wrong. Gerard doesn't crumble to offensive words from some guy he already doesn't like. He just gets defensive and goes back to he ignorant anger.Author's response
Yes, yes they are.
I like you're analogy there (the one about putting out fire with fire), I think it's definitely something that both Pete and Gerard need to hear.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-09
Ooh and sorry for not reviewing the past two chapters, I was slammed with homework as soon as I got back from break.
They were lovely as well and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! :]Author's response
Don't worry about not review the last two chapters, the fact that you were nice enough to review even one means the world!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review and I hope that you don't get too much homework! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-09
-biting the fucking bullet...-
The characters in this story piss me off soooooo much. Mikey is the only one who's innocent here. Frank, I don't know, he really needs to push Gerard to see things in any way that isn't his own. Goddammit, Gerard, you can't pay people to stop loving, you can't buy love. Everyone's just really fucked up big time. Sigh....
Update when you can, kay? I'll be waiting... (That was creepy... I'm so sorry...) c:Author's response
I'm really sorry that the charaters piss you off.
I agree with you; Mikey is the only entirely innocent part of this, Frank needs to push Gerard a little harder and Gerard, well, he's just being Gerard.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review!Perfectly Imperfect
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-10
Sometimes Mikey pisses me off just as much as Gerard (guilty confession). I mean, I just want him to realise that Pete won't hurt him! Why the hell would Pete hurt him? He needs to understand who he can put his trust in, and keep it with them. Granted, Gerard isn't helping by being such a bastard to him, but I just... Argh! I can't describe how I feel!
I think I just really need a happy ending xD But what's a happy ending without the depressing bits leading up to it?Author's response
Don't feel guilty about Mikey pissing you off, I can definitely see what you mean; he needs to learn to trust people better, especially when that person is his boyfriend.
I haven't got as far as planning a definite ending yet, but I will try my hardest to make it happy(ish). The bits leading up to it are definitely going to be depressing, though.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
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