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Put the roses down if you thought it was ever here.
(#) -Veronika- 2013-09-03;-; oh god this was beautiful. I loved it. It's Kitty, used to my xXchickenwithatacoXx. If ever you need to talk to someone or rant or fangirl about someone's titties (jk), email me at firstname.lastname@example.org. Please. This was amazing. Especially the end.
Author's responseReally? You think so? Whoa, I appreciate that, man...I thought this stuff was like, like, I don't know something that morphed and pooled in my brain...kind of like ooblick, you know...when you heat it up? Does some really weird shit. But, thank you very much. It's been so long since I've had a new reviewer! Gah. Exciting.
Kitty, right! I remember you from around the block here. :D
Hahah, back at you, man, you seem rad, my email's: email@example.com
You're really too nice. I'm glad somebody liked it, so thanks. :)
(#) upinflames 2013-09-04do you see envelopes when you tap the words out?
do you know the taste of the adhesive seal,
the feel of dips where your pen dug in too hard –
- whose name you wrote on the other side…
maybe the bow on the package
the care taken to wrap it up neat
tides you over
do you let go when the words have been sent out
do you wonder if they ever receive your presents
can’t i just
p.s. - it's kinda like therapy in that sort of soul crushing way
Author's responseamicitiae nostrae memoriam spero sempitername fore.
alles komt goet.
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-09-05God dang. Do you know how much I loved this.
(A lot. It was perfection.)
Author's responseWhoa, two new reviewers----with pleasant things to read! You're too kind, man. :) Thank you.
- I know I say this a lot, but this is one of my favorites that you've written. You just keep on consistently writing amazing poetry.
If this is you talking, I hope you're okay, Rah Rah. I know that writing can be therapeutic for some people and I hope that it can be for you as well... you seem to have a lot going on. If you wanna talk, you know how.
Okay. I just really like this and I miss you. I've been missing a lot of people tonight, wow.
(Also, I really like the song.)
Author's response"disiecti membra poetae."
I think I'm the reason.
I'm not going to bore you with saying the same thing I always do (even though you really are like, supernaturally kind. really. i didn't think that was a superpower before i talked with you), so I'm just going to wonder and really examine how you can like it/any of my writing so much.
I'm fine, Mirrrrrrrr. Just fine. I know what name to rudely type to you, if necessary. :D
But. My question is...do you? 'Cause the elephant doesn't normally hoard the show this long, catch what I'm saying? Monkey'll be around later for Q&A.
I miss you too, dude!!! Seriously, my sanity drops when you're gone. Like, fo' shiznizz.
(I was hoping someone would appreciate it. Had a feeling it'd be you. :D)
(#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-09-08Holy shit.
Oh my gosh Rah Rah. This is, this is beyond amazing. I'm in awe. This is just pure beauty.
I hope you're okay, you know my email. I'm always here.
This is just one of my many favorites. I just, I love this. I love how you can write all this and it sounds so incredible.
I miss you.
That song was also really awesome. I really liked it!
This is just so good and dude, you're such a good writer and damn.
Author's responseAhhhh man, sorry, Abby! I just saw the review, like, legit, man, this second!
But, wow, man, you really think it's that good? I don't know what to say, Abs!!! Gah, thank you so much.
I am okay, I'm just a little loopy 'cause I'm so tired and school started. But how are you?! I'm going to send you an email sometime today, I promise! I have soooooo much homework it's not even cool.
I miss you a lot, man. I was just thinking about you, actually and holy shit you reviewed my poem! Ahh.
Ahah, I thought you might like it! The Eagles are really fantastic.
I can't tell you how much it means to me that you think all this of my writing. Really, it means a lot.
(#) XKilljoyParadeX 2013-11-02I love your poetry so much. Seriously, no joking here, I swear it's genius.
And don't take this in a creepy way, but i'd love to know what goes on inside your head...
Maybe one day we'll find out a way to cut ourselves open and find all the secrets we thought we'd never have to see again.
I hope you keep writing for a long long time, long enough for me to read your latest poem on my deathbed maybe. :)x
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