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breath of tomorrow
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breath of tomorrow
(#) Mirazal 2015-03-07
this is really interesting and pretty different from everything else you've posted, and i like it a lot.Author's response
MIR BABY MAN HOW ARE YOU WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN OR HAVE I BEEN SOMEWHERE AHHH MIR!!!!!!
ah, thank you dude! i'm glad it's different, i was trying to make it sound like a backwoods southern speak. actually, screw that, i have no idea what i was trying for. i did one of the magnet found poem things and there's a story in this poem that's kinda like, hard to see with all the poor grammar? but yes, thank you so much, dude! are you back??
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