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- i really really love this, and i especially like the way you used red and blue, fire and ocean, yup.... excellently done, honestly.
i've read this about six times, and i'm trying to figure out what it all means but i feel like i have it all wrong lol. i get a feeling that it's a tragedy, like waiting for something that's never going to happen, or someone who is not coming back. in this case it's a brother who is dead to the world and tries to forget pain by using depressants. also i get the feeling of a loss of innocence, an introduction to the darkness of the world, etc....
.... bro i really hope you're okay.
anyway i probably completely got that all wrong, plus there's so much more to it than what i said, and i'm a bit sleepy... so yeah.
i hope you're doing well rah rah, i do miss talking to you.
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