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ok. i just joined on and i found this girl (Mist_Demon_Girl)
she has good plots, it's just that she doesn't understand how to make her stories exciting and to make you want to read more. could someone xplain this to her cause i cant.
thank you
I hate to say it, but you have to fight your own battles. You just have to leave a review under one of her stories or contact her an say that you were attracted to her story because of the plot...but then it got kind of dull...and I didn't have an urge to read more.

If she has a mild temper then she will be able to accept this fact and try to correct her writing. Or she could talk back and spaz out completly and defend her writing. Or she cold even say that she will change things but won't actually. Or she will spaz out but take your words of advice to heart.

If you need me to back you up then just contact me, have fought a few battles...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hugs and Kisses: Pinkfroggie06
thanks for the advice. her plots are good, it's just... ok thanks.