This story is the whole reason why I've made an account with this site! It's wonderful and I just love the way you've convincingly portrayed Albus Dumbledore as a sort of "root of all evil." It gives an interesting spin on the story line and I love the interactions between the characters.
I especially love the way you've made Dobby an important character. I don't think he gets near enough credit in the books, let alone in the world of fanfiction.
I hope you continue with this soon and I look forward to reading more!