(#) noylj 2010-07-12
Well, unless Draco is better than canon!Draco, we should see the end of the Malfoy line with the first task.
Would like a lot more details about Sirius getting free and the scandal and the Crouches and the scandal and Fudge and the scandal (surely it would be of no real effort to show many of Fudge's crimes and that of other Purees (may they truly be pureed). Also, I would love to have heard Hermy and her parents ranting about the injustices being exposed and threatening to remove Herms and Harry ASAP.
Story is too good to swiftly fly through all the fun stuff. The toad was killed too quickly and Snape should have snuffed it a month ago.
I always liked getting Moldie under the Draught of Living Death and then going out and searching any and all means he used to stay alive.
Wil McG ever realize what an ass-licking sycophant she has become?