Review for The Little Merman
(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-06-14 05:13:04 AM
The only thing I could suggest is to try to split it into paragraphs. It would just be easier to read this way.
Keep up the good work!
There is a reason humans and vampires never marry. Integra should have brushed up on her vampire lor...
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A lament, to what was. *Rated R for language*
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