Review for The Little Merman
The Little Merman
(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-06-14 05:13:04 AM
Wow! I love this!
The only thing I could suggest is to try to split it into paragraphs. It would just be easier to read this way.
Keep up the good work!
-Maria
sXe
The only thing I could suggest is to try to split it into paragraphs. It would just be easier to read this way.
Keep up the good work!
-Maria
sXe
Author's response
I know. But I get confused trying to do that. Sorry if that bothers you.
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