Review for The Little Merman

The Little Merman

(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-06-14 05:13:04 AM

Wow! I love this!

The only thing I could suggest is to try to split it into paragraphs. It would just be easier to read this way.

Keep up the good work!

-Maria
sXe

Author's response

I know. But I get confused trying to do that. Sorry if that bothers you.

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