Review for I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

(#) japulapu 2011-08-08 09:35:28 AM

It's very different from the usual. A stroke of genius, if I may say so. It's far easier to write a romantic piece. But it's these bits to do with though process, inner feelings and suspense that really test an author. The plot is interesting, the writing is flawless, but it isn't particularly striking. The plot definately makes me want more, but there aren't too many metaphors, phrases or puns used. If this is your style of writing, then I appreciate that. It's still very nice. I think you have done a very good job. My advice to any author - continue, take your time, don't force anything out.

Author's response

Well thank you! I'm glad you think so. I'm glad you think the plot's interesting, and that the writing is flawless.

Ah yes. I have actually recently become aware I don't use many metaphors.. and I think I'm going to try increase them. But yes, this is my writing style.

Overall, thank you!

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