oh well... what could i say? this was great, thank you (: and good you didn't die... we wouldn't be reading this story if you had! xd lol sorry, it would suck if those kids would have killed you (okay i sound totally terrible now.... maybe i just shut the fuck up).
....... anyway (after my mindless rambling) i'd like to say that the main point of this is that keep going, i want to know what happens next! (: