Review for I'm Not Okay (I Promise)

I'm Not Okay (I Promise)

(#) BessColt 2012-06-01 08:35:33 AM

I like the story so far. It's such friendly, sometimes kinda fluff (in good way). The only thing that's bother me is how Amber appears all of sudden near of them. e.g. here, or later in Gerard's bath. It seems strange a little.

Author's response

I think I put in that Gerard and Amber are drinking buddies. Also she knows Frank. Amber kind of shows up when Frank is with them.

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