Review for The Blood Pen (the trigger on the gun)
Although, if I'm completely honest with you, "Blood pen" just reminds me of a tampon. I don't know if that was intentional :D If it was, then your goal was achieved!
As for the ending, I loved it, because it's sort of vague. It can go either way. The way I choose to see it is in the positive light, but it can also be seen in a negative way... Okay, I won't start analyzing it here but hey, this made me think! :D Not many things can make my brain work, so consider this a success.
I admire you so much and it was nice to hear that from you.
(ERMAHGERD YOU'RE RIGHT! XD I totally didn't mean it though- I was thinking more blood quill from Harry Potter. I'm glad it entertained you, though!)
OMG, that wasn't even really much of an ending. I kinda just stopped writing it. But I see what you mean. :) glad you liked it!
I was feeling kind of down last night, so I wrote this to distract myself. Eh. You guys can have it....
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