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eighteen

by XxkelseyxX 5 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2008/09/18 - Updated: 2008/09/19 - 1258 words

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  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-18 03:48:59 PM

    Sorry I havent been reviewing, I have had lots of college work and loads of stories to read.

    This was an amazing chapter and it was written so well, it flowed great and was easy to follow.

    Poor Brooklyn though!

    Cant wait for more :)

    Dondon x
  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) AlexSanDee 2008-09-18 07:58:47 PM

    Nice chapter. Well written and exciting.
  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) alice93 2008-09-19 09:37:12 AM

    Oh shit. Poor Brooklyn. I can't wait to find out what happened to her. I'm glad Mikey hugged Gee-it just made the chapter all the more perfect! Seriously, great chapter. I really don't know what else to say?!?! Update soon.
    Alice.
  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-09-19 04:36:57 PM

    I can't wait for more! Awesome job!
  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) kitkatpwl 2008-09-22 09:45:35 AM

    Kels, I am so sorry! I missed TWO of your updates! I had friends down from California and I was completely distracted.

    Nonetheless, I'm here now and I'm ready to review!

    Alright, so things really aren't looking too good for Mikey and Brook, are they? It's just such a hard place to be in - recovering. The temptation must be exhaustingly overwhelming and with Brook's self-harming past it only adds to the trouble and pain.

    I know that I said that they were perfect for each other, blah blah blah, but, honestly, I'm starting to doubt it. I'm really not sure that the love is strong enough to overcome this - I'm not sure that BROOK is strong enough. She's right, Mikey can't spend his entire life looking out for her - she has to be able to do this for herself, and she's really not faring so well thus far.

    I like how Mikey wants to protect her, how much he loves her - it's cute and it sort of makes me want to cry.

    I also really liked the "spaghetti legs" comment. Nice imagery. :)

    Update soon!!!!

    Cheers
    Kat

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