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A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) HATE 2009-01-25
Great start loved the Harry/Katie bit there is no where near enough stories with harry and alicia/angelina/katie. But i did not like the hint of Harry and Ginny she is too young in this story and i hate her anyway lol. But you did kinda make them come across as whores but apart from that i liked it please continue this story.Author's response
I have a couple of sequels done. This was originally a one-shot.
I have Harry interested in Ginny for a specific reason, which will become clear in future stories.A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) DJ32 2009-01-25
That was hot and I am a big Harry/Katie fan and "Hate" is rght in his review there is no where near enough stories with harry and alicia/angelina/katie. I so hope you keep this going thanks for writting.Author's response
I have a sequel ready and am working on another.
Thanks for the kind words.A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) jjracer24 2009-01-26
Great story, couldn't help but notice that it appeared to have a set up for future updates. I can't tell you how much that would be appreciated. I have to agree with the others, there aren't enough Harry and Alicia/Angelina/Katie pairings. Keep up the good work and update soon.Author's response
Thanks for the kind words.
I'll see if I can't get the sequel up sometime this week.A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) dennisud 2009-01-26
What about Hermione, Luna and Susan? The more the merrier! Plus I love getting on Ron's arse!
;-)Author's response
There will be other women in Harry's future, but not Hermione or Luna in this case. Susan is a possibility.
Remember, Luna's only a third-year at this point and Harry hasn't really met her yet.A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) Arkenstone007 2009-01-26
Why is the story double posted with 2 different sets of reviews?Author's response
I honestly don't know why it posted twice, I only submitted it once.
And I had reviews on both before I could delete one.
I've noticed Ficwad does strange things occasionally.A Perfect Day for Flying
(#) Aelfwine 2009-02-09
Cute. Nicely done!
I have to admit that I'm with dennisud on Hermione and Luna. Oh well. ;-)
I don't see anything wrong with Ginny, personally--she's only a year younger than Harry, for God's sake, and he's being careful with her.
I don't particularly think you've made whores of Katie, Angelina, and Alicia, either, FWIW.Author's response
I'm trying to keep Harry's relationship with Hermione and Luna more in tune with Canon. I never planned on him having a sexual relationship with Hermione.
Harry's relationship with Ginny will become more complicated in future stories.
Katie, Angie and Alicia are normal, horny teenage witches, as far as I'm concerned. They certainly don't think of themselves as whores.
Thanks for the review and I hope you'll enjoy the next part when I get it posted.
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