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Child play

by nukyster 5 Reviews

Before he knew it he was left alone with three pair of slightly worried gazes set on him.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2010/05/11 - Updated: 2010/05/11 - 4107 words

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  • Read between the lines

    (#) Yekith 2010-05-11 03:51:07 PM

    Well, that woman took a big risk leaving Frank in charge of the kids to begin with, she doesn't even know him well yet and what she does know can't be too good... Of course, it's good that she still trusted him, in a way it maybe even felt good to Frank that she trusted him, but if something had happened, she was in part to blame. Frank seems to be responsible enough, though, and that little kid Danny owns, he saved his ass!
  • Read between the lines

    (#) mysilentromance 2010-05-11 04:54:20 PM

    Danny must be the coolest little kid to ever live. (Even if he is fictional.) I like the way he sticks up for Frank. I wouldn't have guessed that he would be so brave as to defend Frank.

    You're doing an excellent job with character development. With each new chapter you can learn so much about everyone.
  • Read between the lines

    (#) just-peachy 2010-05-11 10:39:24 PM

    I really like this, I can't wait to find out happens :)
    Danny is adorable
  • Read between the lines

    (#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-06-19 03:33:23 PM

    i hope you update soon
    im really dying to read more of this
    :]
  • Read between the lines

    (#) blinding 2011-01-27 04:46:53 PM

    This shit is rad :)) I think you're doing a great job. I've been reading some other stories and this one is by far the best (even if the characters weren't Way and Iero but it's great they are). No more excuses, keep writing! :)

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