- Well, that woman took a big risk leaving Frank in charge of the kids to begin with, she doesn't even know him well yet and what she does know can't be too good... Of course, it's good that she still trusted him, in a way it maybe even felt good to Frank that she trusted him, but if something had happened, she was in part to blame. Frank seems to be responsible enough, though, and that little kid Danny owns, he saved his ass!
(#) mysilentromance 2010-05-11Danny must be the coolest little kid to ever live. (Even if he is fictional.) I like the way he sticks up for Frank. I wouldn't have guessed that he would be so brave as to defend Frank.
You're doing an excellent job with character development. With each new chapter you can learn so much about everyone.
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