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Counting your face among the living..

Visits from family make your stomach knot.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2011/08/07 - Updated: 2011/08/07 - 746 words

Reviews

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) midnight_star22 2011-08-07 06:39:52 PM

  I want to know what he did!! Gahh! Keep updating please (:
  Btw, if you ever need to talk, I'm here!

  Author's response

  Haha I will! I love writing this story, the response is incredible. :)
  
  Thank you! xox

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-08 09:35:28 AM

  It's very different from the usual. A stroke of genius, if I may say so. It's far easier to write a romantic piece. But it's these bits to do with though process, inner feelings and suspense that really test an author. The plot is interesting, the writing is flawless, but it isn't particularly striking. The plot definately makes me want more, but there aren't too many metaphors, phrases or puns used. If this is your style of writing, then I appreciate that. It's still very nice. I think you have done a very good job. My advice to any author - continue, take your time, don't force anything out.

  Author's response

  Well thank you! I'm glad you think so. I'm glad you think the plot's interesting, and that the writing is flawless.
  
  Ah yes. I have actually recently become aware I don't use many metaphors.. and I think I'm going to try increase them. But yes, this is my writing style.
  
  Overall, thank you!

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-08-08 01:28:53 PM

  interesting!! get updating woman!

  Author's response

  Haha thanks! I will soon. xo

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) VanJA212 2011-08-12 01:32:57 AM

  I liked this chapter very much, i was really glad to see them happy together again. Well, as happy as they can get after what Gerard has done. I WANNA KNOW NAOW! D: But i can wait xD
  Update soon please :)

  Author's response

  Ah, I'm glad you think so. Haha, you might find out soon.. It'll all unravel at the same time.
  
  I just have! :D xo

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