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Let's douse ourselves in these deathly lies.

Gerard finally finds out 'the plan' and we meet the new prisoner.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2011/08/14 - Updated: 2011/08/21 - 1678 words

Reviews

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-14 06:01:23 PM

  i love the new prisoner :) killed 11 people at prom, that's like wow and her blood lust makes it even more morbid and awesome. still confusing but a great chapter!

  Author's response

  I know, it was a great audition.. :P
  Thank you anyway :)

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) midnight_star22 2011-08-14 06:22:07 PM

  I love this! I love how Annelise knows and I don't XD
  You're a fantastic author!! Can't wait to read more!!! You captured her perfectly :)

  Author's response

  Haha, I'm glad you like her! Thank you!

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) japulapu 2011-08-15 01:23:58 AM

  Still, a girl in a guy's prison, explain that won't you? Like I said before, she must be a pretty tough chick if she ended up there. For some strange reason I imagine her to be blonde with a bubblegum pink dress. It's the name and the way she talks(don't kill me). I don't love her character but nice chapter. It's definately bringing out emotions nicely.

  Author's response

  I don't recall ever saying it was an all-guys prison. However, if that's how you picture it, then I'd be happy to explain?
  
  Haha, imagine her as you like, although I have no idea where you got the bubblegum pink dress from? I think she seems quite manic and tough! The audition for her interested me. :)
  
  Anyway, thank you! :D

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) MyChemFreak 2011-08-15 05:19:26 AM

  Well, as I edited that chapter, I don't have to tell you how much I loved it... Do I?
  Oh fuck it, I loved it! It was really amazingly brilliant :)
  But Annelise scares me:(

  Author's response

  Haha, no not really! Either way, I appreciate it. XD
  Haha, she's so bloodthirsty!

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) VanJA212 2011-08-15 11:53:10 AM

  I love, love, LOVE Annelise :D She sounds awesome ^^ And i'm sure they'll all become close friends :)
  Update soon please! And i mean, really soon because i can't wait for more X)

  Author's response

  Ahh cool. Ah, but will they?
  And yes! I start ASAP.

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) Niamh04 2011-08-16 11:37:23 AM

  I love Annelise.
  She reminds me of a girl who stabbed people with forks when they irritated her.
  Back to your story- It's amazing. Honestly. But please update....

  Author's response

  I'm glad you like her. :)
  Haha, did you know her?!
  
  And thank you so much! I will soon. I update about every 2 days.

• I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

  (#) Niamh04 2011-08-16 11:37:23 AM

  I love Annelise.
  She reminds me of a girl who stabbed people with forks when they irritated her.
  Back to your story- It's amazing. Honestly. But please update....

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