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To The End

"I love you, remember that.", she spoke, not breaking her gaze into his eyes. "To the end.", he replied.

Category: Drama - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2011/08/29 - Updated: 2011/08/30 - 792 words - Complete

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• To The End

  (#) SyraStrange 2011-11-09 02:55:58 PM

  BUT WHY...?
  I love the way you write; you made me feel so stupid 'cause I didn't know what "pallid" was...
  Great story! I hope you write something a little less sad and abrupt. It was still beautiful...

• To The End

  (#) ZombieSlayer13x 2011-11-28 06:24:47 PM

  wow this was....wow.....I really liked it! Just some helpful betaing here but, you dont' need to put the period, quotation marks, and then a comma. Just comma then quotes. Like for example:
  
  "I love you, remember that.",
  
  should be:
  
  "I love you, remember that,"
  
  It was a great story! :X

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