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"I love you, remember that.", she spoke, not breaking her gaze into his eyes. "To the end.", he replied.
(#) ZombieSlayer13x 2011-11-28 06:24:47 PMwow this was....wow.....I really liked it! Just some helpful betaing here but, you dont' need to put the period, quotation marks, and then a comma. Just comma then quotes. Like for example:
"I love you, remember that.",
"I love you, remember that,"
It was a great story! :X