- This needs some work but it shows promise. The work it needs is editing and a Bata. But it's good. I'd really like to see this continue as I find it interesting. Thick-As-A-Brick Dumbbell will have fits once he realizes Harry has left the country! He'll be pulling out his hair when he learns Harry's an orphan again. Maybe this time he'll actually follow the Potters' will?
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