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Chapter 11
Who's grabbing Frank? [People, look at the warning, you can skip this, but it actually does have a part to play. It's not just "Oh Yeah, It Fits In".]
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Reviews
Hero
(#) TakeMyLife 2012-02-14
So I kinda sat here refreshing the page every ten minutes and when I saw you update I nearly screamed.
I think it's safe to say you are one of the most amazing writers ever. Not only was it rough frerard sex, but the way you wrote it leaves me speachless. You're pure amazingness. I really can't wait till the next update now, I'm so excited to read the rest of the story! It's just so amazing!Hero
(#) raytorosfro 2012-02-14
Oh my...... Holy......
That was amazing. And hot... And I'm speechless. Your first smut? But.... YOU SHOULD WRITE A LOT MORE OF IT O.O
anywhooo seriously another amazingly brilliant chapter :D xoxoHero
(#) GealachGirl 2012-02-14
O.o Umm... uh... I have read a lot of smut, most Panic! but that's beside the point, and this was absolutely fucking awesome. Is it odd that when I read the warnings, out loud, I said 'fuck yeah!'? Anyway, I also kept the page up because when I saw the first message it was about ten where you live and I was expecting something soon. The rough, violence of it was something I've not read before and I thought it was brilliant, but how it kind of faded when they got to the actual deed and then became a little gentler was very realistic. This was a fantastic chapter and I cannot wait until the next one.Hero
(#) Merci-PourLeVenin 2012-02-14
This can't be your first smut!
Hell that was fuckin perfect.
Like holy shit. It was so rough and sensual and perfect.
As is your story.
This entire story is just gold.
And I'm sad that it'll be over soon but fuck has this been one of my favourite stories I have ever read.
And I've read a lot of fanfic.
But seriously getting into a fistfight and themfucking eachother's brains out... That was hot as hell.
Well I go on a bit don't I?
But you need to understand how fucking amazing this is. Like you're a saint or something.
If you couldn't tell... I really love this.
XØHero
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-02-14
Have I mentioned I love you? This is so epic. I remember writing my first smut scene...(shivers)
Fucking awesome job, ma amis. Rating will be done!Hero
(#) Heymimusic 2012-02-14
This is just mind-blowing. Your first Smut scene?! this is too extremely amazing to be a first !! I love this chapter! It's just... Gah!! Hot and amazing and well written and purely epic. Can't wait to see what happens next in the later chapters! :DHero
(#) Love_it_or_leave_it 2012-02-14
Oh my gosh!! That was fucking amazing!! Damn!! There are no coherent words that came to mind when I read that! Damn!! Wow!! Firstly, that was amazing!! And secondly, you updated!! Yay!! :D I cannot wait until you upload next!! I'll be waiting!!
Xo Jay
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