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19- Don't Try To Make It Right

by XxPerfectTomorrowxX 4 Reviews

"You're naive Hayley but... thank you."

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: NC-17 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2012/03/28 - Updated: 2012/03/28 - 2110 words - Complete


  • Give My Heart Back

    (#) GAClive 2012-03-28 08:08:26 AM

    such a great chapter. You've left me impressed as always and this story is so great with invoking emotions in the reader.

    Author's response

    Thank you. =D I was hoping to make the emotions stand out. It's so easy to write the emotions in this story, it's my favorite part of writing this. There is always something for each character to feel. It's probably the story that I'm most involved in.
  • Give My Heart Back

    (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-03-28 10:35:41 AM

    Aw wow. Totally agree with the above. You're so good at getting character emotions through, I learn a lot from reading your stuff. Great update.


    Author's response

    :D I'm so glad! & thank you. I always appreciate your reviews (as you know) they are always so uplifting.
  • Give My Heart Back

    (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-03-29 11:58:52 AM

    Gotta admit, that cock thing made me laugh a little, even if it WAS a strange image. :P

    Ahh, Mikey's always been my favorite.. Well, second favorite.. Right next to Frank.. And Gerard.. Haha:)

    Author's response

    Haha, very odd.

    I adore Frank. He's got to be my absolute favorite. Then comes cute little Mikey! :D
  • Give My Heart Back

    (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-03-29 12:00:45 PM

    I just remembered this: Way back when I was first getting into My Chem, I had their Revenge cd and I couldn't figure out who was who because (silly me) I didn't even THINK about using Google. So basically, Matt was Mikey, Frank was Ray, Ray was Matt, Gerard was Gerard, and Mikey was Frank. Does that make sense? xD

    Author's response

    Haha, completely understand what you're saying because I did that too. I was just guessing names, pasting them to their faces and I was horribly off!

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