(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-06-25This is a good start. Update this soon or I'll show up to your house with a pissed Nnoitra.
Author's responseAwh, thanks xD
Sorry for the late update though, family and holidays and all that...
I'll try to update once a week from now on, I promise. :D
Gives promised cookies
- I think its pretty good, more would be nice...but I would not add frerard, just keep it straight because everyone does that and its getting to cliche....but very nice start.
Author's responseThanks. :) Yeah, I don't think it is gonna be a Frerard (mainly because I can't write it, freaks me out to much) but I think I'll be hinting in it...
(#) lalaland123456 2012-07-24I think itd be fine if you put frerard in there but if you do i would try not to let frank be damaged to ya know let him be the guy wholl stick up for you no matter what kinda thing and i would add a lot of details if you chose to go down that road meaning just try not to be like a lot of others. other than that i love it and i think you should add more chapters!!!!
Author's responseThanks for reviewing, dude xD I agree with you on the not-so-damaged Frank, and there'll be a lot more details in it as the chapters go on...
(#) lalaland123456 2012-07-29yeah its over cliched where franks always i guess you could say the girl and that just doesnt seem right to me thx 4 agreeing and i cant wait to read future chapters!!!!! ILY
P.S. tanks 4 da kookies
Author's responseYeah, personally I prefer stories where Gerard is 'fucked up' so to say?
AWWH! HOLY FUCK, ILY TOO! :D
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