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Seventeen

by marietsy 2 Reviews

WIP AU Harry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to le...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Humor - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2005/06/04 - Updated: 2005/06/04 - 4505 words

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  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) OctoberMoon 2005-06-06 08:28:29 PM

    I have to say this is one of the better stories that I have read in awhile I can't really think of much else to say other than please please don't abandon this story I can't wait to read more as far as constructive criticism goes nothing much stands out except I'd love for you to do a chapter that is Dumbledore's thoughts the way you did Voldemorts that should be VERY entertaining lets see what else maybe a bit more about how Harry's old "friends" are reacting I would love to see each and everyone of them slowly come to the realization that they were so wrong and that Dumbledore is positivly evil but I'm sure you already have that planned in some form or fashion.I can't really come up with anything but praise I really like this story and the chapters are nice and long just the way I like them
  • Flames of Betrayal

    (#) TxA_GunFighter 2005-12-12 11:17:29 AM

    Nice. Time to get alittle payback.

    gunny

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