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Break me.

by electricviolence 4 Reviews

Stop the pain, stop my breathing.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/04/13 - Updated: 2013/04/13 - 137 words - Complete

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  • Break me.

    (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-04-13 03:04:07 AM

    This is beautiful, I love what you did with the bold letters. If you need to talk, you know where I'm at. But that is amazing babe.

    Abbie xx

    Author's response

    Thank you.

    I tried to add a heart at the end of that, but it won't let me.

    < 3

    Good enough
  • Break me.

    (#) Mirazal 2013-04-13 06:09:32 AM

    This isn't bad at all, darling.

    I love this. I love you.

    Author's response

    Thank you. I love you, too.
  • Break me.

    (#) XKilljoyParadeX 2013-04-14 03:54:10 PM

    This is brilliant, I love it. Love the bold letters thing as well, never thought of doing that before x

    Author's response

    Thanks a lot!
  • Break me.

    (#) HatedEyes 2013-04-17 12:06:45 PM

    Dude, dude, DUDE.
    This is so good.
    I want to cry,
    Why are you so talented.

    Author's response

    Please, don't cry.
    Thank you.

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