- This sounds like a really rad to the max idea for a story. It would work really well as an original (as you mentioned Killjoys, I'm assuming it's a MCR thing??) and I almost wish it was all original and not even an auditioned thingymajig but hey, whatever you want, it's not like I'm the emperor of the world. Yet. What I wanted to say that I'm really intrigued by this little plotbunny thing here and I'm going to read your story when you hopefully write it (yes?).
- As Claire and Ryan already pointed out to you; this sounds exactly like the book City Of Ember (holy shit it's amazing)
But I'm going to be honest, so don't get pissed please
But adding in different characters doesn't change much. Go with the idea, but add some twists in the plot.
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