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Trusting You, Trusting Me

by PansyAngel 1 Reviews

Lazer Queen and Fun Ghoul continue with their conversation as it takes a slightly different turn as they go further on, but what people need to realise that with questions you don't always get good...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Fantasy - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2013/08/18 - Updated: 2013/08/18 - 1431 words

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  • The Life and Times of a Killjoy

    (#) japulapu 2013-08-20 05:24:30 PM

    Hey! Ficwad is messing up my updates so sorry for the late-ish review. Right, so it's not really progressed much. You sort of repeated the same things and it was kind of only a chapter for nostalgia. I think Lazer is becoming slightly Mary-Sue. She's a bit too perfect and a bit too 'been there, done that'. She seems kind of flawless which can get a bit annoying. Also, you used 'rathered' in this chapter, which is acceptable but not preferred. I like how Frank is in complete awe of Lazer and I found that really adorable. I also found the 'deer in headlights' bit very funny but slightly confusing. I enjoyed it overall.

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