(#) CyanideCola 2013-07-28Wow this is amazing, its so detailed and awesome but just one thing this isn't meant for it to be said in a mean way but just so you know there are a few spelling mistakes (pressed the wrong letter on the keyboard???) i do it all the time your not the only one
but this story is amazing please carry on
Please update soon if there is more
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