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Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
The Witches of the world have a Secret, of course poor Harry is stuck in the middle. Post Goblet of Fire.
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Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) anglosaxon 2007-04-03
though i have already read this story.... i have again and i find it great.... except for a few points much later in the story..... great story..... keeping writing....Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) JustAReader 2007-04-03
seems cool, hope it stays good. Its posted three times though.Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) ChiVayne 2007-04-04
Nice atart, having at least one part of the Ministry being competent. Harry may die, but he'll die a happy man.Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) davidg2006 2007-06-21
I tried, I really did. I sat for what seemed like an eternity and tried to finish this story - eventually I had to give up just halfway through Chapter 12.
This isn't a bad story, nice premise, original too - I think its the sheer scale that brings it down in my estimation. There are simply so many "bonded" that its a group ensemble constantly and becomes awfully repetitive at times.
I might come back to finish this story in the future, however for the moment, I just can't.Author's response
Yep its repetitive in the early going. I actually debated this but decided to leave it like that. Sorry you didnt like it.Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) oniryuu 2007-06-24
Nice. I just finished Dark Lady.
Can't wait for the conclusion.
And you have no idea how long I prayed when reading this that Tonks be Alpha.
You just gotta love her with Harry.Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) sargentaaron2004 2007-12-12
I don't know how far I am through this story, but i will have finished it by the end of today, (and start 'Dark Lady' Tomorrow.
Ok, it's a good story I like it fully except for one thing:
THE QUEEN! Ok, she was ok the first time she appeared, when she made Harry the Duke of Magic, But after that she was just an annoying charracter that played no important part of the story, (she may do later) all she did was go round smile at everyone (the occasional laugh also) and knight people. The charrecter has gotten so annoying I want to stop reading everytime she is mentioned :| the only reason I keep reading is because the rest of the story is compelling and exciting.
Ok, so thats my rant over, hope you keep writing stories like this.
Thanks for a great story so far :)
Regards, sargentaaron2004Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) nimistar 2008-03-30
great story with a decient plot, and lets not forget all the sex. its a little hard to keep track of all the different mates, it seems many have the same name, but thats not really a problem. the sequal sounds like a good story and i cant wait to read it.Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) druikin 2008-07-24
I have to agree there are too many mates (I know! I'm male too... and i'm saying too many mates?) I think a good harem size is probably 10 or less so they get "individual attention"Harry Potter and the Witches' Secret
(#) kjp93 2009-07-28
I thought you might want too know somebody is plagirising you over at ff.net here;s the link.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5252951/1/hp
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