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Issues

Kaiba has some issues.

Category: Yu-Gi-Oh! - Rating: R - Genres: Erotica, Humor - Characters: Joey Wheeler, Seto Kaiba - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2005/11/29 - Updated: 2005/11/30 - 2198 words - Complete

Reviews

• Issues

  (#) pyrefly_sky 2006-03-28 02:35:00 PM

  I really liked this! Very amusing and very insightful! You've nailed Jou brillently! I'll certainly be reading this again when I need cheering up! :)

• Issues

  (#) Hypergraphia 2006-05-28 05:31:54 PM

  I've seen him go from calm-and-cold-bitch to clucking-mother-hen in five seconds flat for the kid. Scared the freakin shit outta me first time I saw it.
  
  laugh I always thought that was pretty scary, too. Mokuba's got quite a hold on his brother.
  
  Loosely translated that means my shirt got wet so I took it off and put a clean one on.
  
  Aww, poor Kaiba. Too busy being traumatized to pay attention to the pretty, hmm? ^_^
  
  I cap my pen and twirl it idly before sticking it in my mouth to suck on. In the corner of my eye I can see him shift. If looks could kill...well, I'd either be very dead or very screwed in so many senses of the word.
  
  XD Jounouchi's so mean. I kinda want to draw that, now... the pen in Jounouchi's mouth and Kaiba trying not to watch, I mean.
  
  a few typos:
  
  hassel - hassle
  attcks - attacks
  damnest - damnedest
  throtle - throttle
  assesment - assessment
  definately - definitely
  spiting - spitting
  leisurly - leisurely
  Shakespear - Shakespeare
  
  Overall, very cute! ^_^ I love Jounouchi being snarky about Kaiba.

  Author's response

  Yeah, it's fun playing with Kaiba, and Jounouchi is mean. The pen scene would make a good picture, if you do draw it let me know? And thanks for pointing out the horrible spelling. I have absolutely no excuse for it, and have fixed those as well as others I found by putting it through a basic spell check. thumps self Thank you so much for pointing that out to me as I probably wouldn't have noticed it on my own.

• Issues

  (#) MafiaQueen 2006-10-23 03:13:37 PM

  Definitely awesome and hilarious!!!!!!

• Issues

  (#) Kill-Your-Own-Chorus 2008-06-13 11:35:44 AM

  Lmao. I looked up the word 'Sadist'
  on dictionary.com and i got
  
  "sexual gratification gained through causing pain or degradation to others."
  
  I was seriously like "what the hell?"
  O_____O
  and then i looked at the second definition and it said
  "any enjoyment in being cruel"
  then i was like,
  "Oh. That's better."
  XD

• Issues

  (#) IlovetheCoreys 2010-08-17 12:09:15 AM

  This is really good! :) I like it. Very well-written, too. :)

• Issues

  (#) SoulSushi 2012-05-22 10:42:05 AM

  I couldn't stop laughing! Brilliant! X3

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