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Raven of the Battle: Alternate Ending

Harry has to make a sacrifice to protect his friends and family. What is it and will he do it?

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Arthur Weasley, Dumbledore, Harry, Hermione, Molly Weasley, Ron - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2006/02/03 - Updated: 2006/02/03 - 5065 words

Reviews

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) Godfric Potter 2006-02-04 07:15:08 AM

  personally I liked the first ending better, I have always been a fan of a more final ending to a fic. Your second ending just kind of left it hanging.
  
  The rest of the fic is very very good. I always enjoy fics which involve the old Gods.
  
  Now my only wish is that you would update some of your other fics, like perhaps Flames of Betrayal ~makes puppy eyes~ pleeaase

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) wolff 2006-02-06 01:39:14 PM

  The second ending was better, with Harry finally reunited with his friends and family. It provided a much stronger emotional punch, and left a much more poigiant feeling in it's wake.

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) DrT 2006-12-23 06:34:38 AM

  The first ending made more sense, but I liked the second one better.
  
  "T"

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) SlutPuppyInTx 2010-06-12 12:22:06 PM

  It was bittersweet, the first ending was, but it was understandable. The 2nd one however, brought tears to my eyes as I'm a sap like that. Keep up the good work!

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) Muggle_Prof 2011-01-03 05:26:04 PM

  Personally, I preferred the second ending. However, I can also see the possibility of taking a part of the first (where Harry's and R/Hr's grandchildren will marry and defeat the next dark lord) and adding it to the second.

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) Nette 2011-07-12 04:16:58 PM

  I'm a sucker for happy endings, so i like the 2nd ending the best. Harry needs to be with his friends, even i he no longer has magic.

• Raven of the Battle

  (#) Mistress_of_Potions 2012-02-08 08:14:43 PM

  I both liked the first ending more, and thought it better fit the story. Harry deserved some peace, and with the second ending, I don't think he'd get it. Sooner or later someone would spill the beans about his being alive, and a squib, and the whole wretched thing would start again.

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