Her battered heart could barely take it. It had been fragile since the beginning, but man, that boy had put her poor paper heart through so many wars, it was ready to give out.
(#) redballoon 2008-04-26 09:02:25 PMthis is beautiful and so full of emotion.
i absolutely loved it!
[ps i play water polo too. :)]
Author's responseaww thanks im glad u liked it.
it was written on impulse yesterday in 10 minutes as my way of venting.
and YAY! a polo buddy! extra cool points for u!
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-04-27 10:55:35 AMZOMG.
It was emotional, tragic, moving, and just everything that I adore in a story.
[Plus, I am totally in love with that song. I listen to it like, 438975 times a day.]
This had captured my heart and I'm rating, cuz it's just that amazing.
You rock. :]
Author's responseaw thank you so much.
you just made my day =]