okay so i like this story, but i am concerned about the child sex. i mean i am a criminal justice major and law is my focus, so to hear or read about a grown man having sex with a 14 yr makes me a little nervous. i don't want another R. kelly if you know what i mean( child pron), maybe if you made her like 16 then that would be the legal age of consent in most states. but other than that i like how the story is written and i can't wait to read more. i would like to see where this leads.