Aww, I was hoping to have the first review on such an awesome story. Oh well, second is still cool. I loved your story. I really want you to continue it soon because that one little chaoter and I am hooked. It had an interesting plot line and I liked the way you descibed the girl. Not some perfect little dainty thing like so many cookie-cutter stories on here. I loved it, and I apologize if I am rambling, but when I like I story I want the author to know. Thanks for posting it. There are rabid ficcy readers like me who greatly appreciate it. Update soon?
Rae