Review for Three's a Crowd

Three's a Crowd

(#) jengrey 2007-06-09

okay, no menang on being the boooring idea person, but i was just thinking on there being a dream sequence in the begii=nning of the next chapter. So, Neil is kissing someone, he opens his eyes and sees Theresa. He says 'I love you Theresa, and goes in for another kiss. But her hand stops him and she says 'So not going to happen.' Neil hears laughing of every kid in school, expecially of Herry, Archie, Atlanta, Odie and Jay. But Jay says 'Nice try Neil.'
'Yah,' Theresa says. 'You've got no chance,' it echoes 'no chance, no chance, no chance.'
Neil wakes up, beads of sweat clinging to his skin.

Anyways, just a sugestion. but hurry up and finish up quickly!!!!! i want to know more!!!!!! how about some J/T/N action!!!!!