The story's fantastic so far. It's a real shame that pokemon stories on this site don't get more reviews.
I'm curious to see what happens with Tyler. It'd be tough to separate him from his pokemon, but it's definitely against the rules.
Looking forward to seeings what's on the way.
Author's response
Thanks for your time and review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, and I should have another chapter soon. As soon as Melanie stops being stupid. kicks her