Wow. What an interesting take on them... Very nice. It was a bit hard to follow at times, but I like the fact that you actually gave them sentient minds. The magical creatures of Harry Potter just aren't explored well enough by most people...
Author\'s Response: I will keep your advice on the story's flow in mind. This story was written about seven months ago, and could use a bit of sprucing up.As for their minds, I figured that there was more to them than canon lets on. : ) Thanks for reviewing!