OHHHH THIS ONE IS REALLY HEATING UP.. AND IT'S JUST THE FIRST CHAPTER!!! yep, really like it. the thingie at the beginning with the prologue was gr8 - really interesting. And I want you to update asap befoer I die of suspense. Oh, and on that note, I'm gonna go and rate it EXCITING!!! Would give some construtive critism but not that sure i have any.. LOL. Hurry and update!! Luv ya!
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