yes yes i know english is probobly not your first language in fact it is not mine either.
but that inly works on myabe the first five works of fiction you write. if after that you still write exactly the same way or in some cases of the text worse, then when you started out... well it makes you wonder dosnt it
i know alot of people that would say that your works are good and to a point i agree with them. but i really think most of your stories are partialy or mostly ruined by the extreme errors founds in parts of the texts.
please please get a beta reader or someone who has either english asa collage mayor or has it as a first language and can spell check and do grammar checks for you becouse its in fact painfull for me to try and read your works.
im sure if you askaround you can find several intrested and willing people who can help you.
hope to see improvment soon