One word: Woah.
Where do I start?? It was phenomenal, really, every word, the sentence structure really paced it too.
I felt as though I was in the forest, watching him scramble around for her and that I was in the place with moe too...
Oh and I think I know it now. BUt I'm likely wrong.
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Author's response
Whoops. Everything I said replying about the stupid TV show and all that, should actually go here. I got the wrong chapter (I hate how ficwad throws around the reviews.)... So... Thank you again.
Send me a message and tell me who you think it is. You'll get a prize. grins (Even if you're wrong.)