(#) BJH 2007-06-29
Hmm, Hermione is getting a bit snippy. Not that anyone can blame since she is fully justified in her stance. It is just an amusing shift from her being one of Dumbledore's greatest supports in canon, to acknowledging his falibility, to condemning him for his errors in trust and judgement.
I like how you are weaving Dian into the plot and I really appreciate the sublty that Snape is trying to use in getting his revenge. It also allows the suspense of it to build slowly through the remainder of the story.
Well done.
BJH