Review for Triumvirate
Triumvirate
(#) celerystalksatnoon 2006-06-29 07:38:04 PM
1. It was lovely, nicely done. However,
2. I think that the bit at the end, with the names, cheapens it just a little. You've established the (the what? the flow? the characters? the story?) Anyway, you've established everything well enough in the beginning that when you name them again at the end it seems a bit redundant.
2. I think that the bit at the end, with the names, cheapens it just a little. You've established the (the what? the flow? the characters? the story?) Anyway, you've established everything well enough in the beginning that when you name them again at the end it seems a bit redundant.
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