Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-07-05

This is a great story. It's funny but original in how you present the cliches. I especially enjoyed what Harry just did to Lucius and the fact that Harry is a mob boss. If Zabini really is that paranoid and if Harry can do magic without being detected then he could set up wards or something for Zabini or something at some point to make a deal with him. But I really want to know what happens when someone tries to whack Harry on Zabini's orders. I also want to see what happened to Pettigrew and if Harry will be able to go around and get Sirius freed.