(#) Rous 2006-07-04
Hmmm, I have no idea what this fandom is about. I confess that I have never heard of it before coming to this sight.
As for you story, I find little to cause me to explore further. You ask questions, then answer with obvious choices. There is no insight given. I know nothing more than before I started. Your writing, at times, seems very deep, then so shallow it defies description. If you would try reading this from the viewpoint of someone new to the fandom, you may understand what I mean. This needs much more filler.