Review for If I could only be normal

If I could only be normal

(#) Lira_Snape 2006-07-06 12:00:10 PM

If you made shorter sentences, using full-stops more often instead of simply commas, your writing would be a lot more understandable and flow a lot better.

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 641815
  • Stories: 40527

Recent Stories